I have never been sated with you
It’s a love that just grew and grew
A love that may often go askew
But I can never get enough of you
Wanted more, needed more
Every day more to adore
Loving you is not a chore
Your simple touch rocks me to the core
I wish I could fix all my mistakes
All the cracks and all the breaks
Rumbles turned into earthquakes
Just waiting for the coup de grace
You make me hot, you make me sweat
For you even I would share claret
Love you forever and that’s dead set
I wish I could give you just one rosette
Walking in the room you make me quiver
Stepping close I start to shiver
It’s like floating aimlessly down a river
I really wish that I could deliver
Lying beside you my heart’s aflutter
I wish I knew the words to utter
All I do is babble and splutter
I feel like I’m lying in melted butter?
Success Inspirers' World
Lovely lines.
lostpropertyrepository
thanks I don’t know what came over me 🙂
Southern by Design
Love this! You make me all melty 😉 You mushy, what’s up with that?!
lostpropertyrepository
Thanks 🙂 I have no idea what that last line was about it just popped in there and it was too late 🙂
Southern by Design
Haha! Well, it gives a twist of character to it 😉
lostpropertyrepository
I wonder if laying in butter is like sleeping on silk sheets
Southern by Design
Slippery I’d think 😉
lostpropertyrepository
Imagine silk and butter….second thoughts maybe not.
Southern by Design
Hmmm, oh sorry did u say something I was thinking 😉
lostpropertyrepository
Hahaha I’m not writing that thought down 😛
Southern by Design
Probably best that way 😉
lostpropertyrepository
If you saw some of the stuff that never gets published you might wish for more about butter and silk 🙂
Southern by Design
Says you 😉
lostpropertyrepository
It wont be today but I’m working on two ideas for poems or short stories, one is a heartbreaker and the other one is based around the line ‘blood drips down Venetian blinds.’ <-- I couldn't make a poem with that last night.
Southern by Design
Oh, I really like that 😀
lostpropertyrepository
The problem I had was that it got way too dark to quickly and even I couldn’t follow it through for more than about 5 lines 🙂
Southern by Design
So perhaps put it in the middle, start lighter and then end dark?
lostpropertyrepository
Yeah not sure yet, it’s a work in progress.
rugby843
So you’re an old softie underneath all that murderous facade?☺️
lostpropertyrepository
I’ve written poems and posts like this before, they flow occasionally, blood flows daily 😛
rugby843
Sort of a Jekyll and Hyde? I’m familiar with that.
lostpropertyrepository
I might be too, I don’t know 😛